tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8275188183391703146.post4794570335819096786..comments2019-01-23T10:56:22.768+00:00Comments on Lizzie the Critic: Wasted by Nicola Morganlizziemayfhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07593786381403918364noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8275188183391703146.post-62283890468201820122010-06-23T22:36:06.279+01:002010-06-23T22:36:06.279+01:00Hi Lizzie, I think your reviews are great. There i...Hi Lizzie, I think your reviews are great. There is only one thing I would change and that is purely for the sake of Facebook. When I see your posts I see basically the same blurb every time, 'Lizzie the critic... this is my blog,' up to 'Thank you.' Subconsciously this says to me that i've read the review already, or that it'll be much the same (which of course it isn't!) and I don't bother, often, to click on it. What would be much more interesting would be if I could see the first few lines of the review. This would tell me if I was likely to be interested in the book, and it would also help you develop the skill of writing brilliant first paragraphs! That's what I need. Something to grab me. This may be difficult technically; I don't know. I shall go on reading them anyway, but this would improve my experience. Thanks for posting them. Pippa R. PS. I keep trying to put a book in the post for your family but haven't managed to do it yet. I haven't forgotten and will do it very soon!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com